Masterpieces of the week

Congratulations this week to Mari Evans and Eleri Emmerson. Mari succeeded in writing a most effective self-portrait, which was enhanced by mature descriptions and interesting information. Mari wrote in a flowing style and used a variety of punctuation. Da iawn ti Mari!
Eleri wrote an excellent description of a place in Cornwall, using an imaginative, highly effective vocabulary and mature concepts. She succeeded in using a wide variety of punctuation to enrich her writing. Da iawn ti Eleri!